Keeping It Classic

This weeks writing was a persuasive piece of writing of why schools should have uniforms not wear mufti. We planned with Miss Mcleod and wrote independently.

This is my writing

Introduction Hook - Thinking about changing your schools uniform?, Don’t!, Keep It Classic What is the argument? I believe we should keep school uniforms rather than switch to mufti
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph You won’t get lost	At trips your easy to find Your school will be unique and represent
Main Point Paragraph 2 Less Laundry	You don’t have to wash a new pair of clothes everyday You don’t have to spend much on laundry powder
Main Point Paragraph 3 Fashion Competition	It discards the competition which could happen when people wear nicer clothes than others No one feels bad if they don’t have the best looking clothes
Conclusion / Summary Overall I think school uniforms should be kept because = 3 reasons

Are you thinking of making your school a mufti school? Well don’t, Keep it classic with school uniforms. I believe we should keep school uniforms because it stops kids from getting lost as well as there is less laundry to do and it stops the competition in fashion.

The first reason schools should have uniforms is because it stops kids from getting lost, because on school trips if you get lost it is easy to identify where you need to go. It also shows the school’s uniqueness and proves that you are proud to represent and respect the school. Did you know uniforms make the school look nicer and neater

The second reason is because there is less laundry for parents everyday, because they don’t have to wash a new pair of clothes everyday, and you won’t have to spend heaps on laundry powder. It will help save money for important things

The third reason is because there is no competition in fashion, there is no fight for who has the best/nice looking clothes and no one will feel embarrassed with what they’re wearing. An example is because girls tend to wear fancier clothes which can make the others feel less important. Did you know the badges would make clothes have little holes which can rip and ruin the clothes?

Overall I think you should not change the school uniform because kids won’t get lost, it’s cheaper and there is no fashion competition. So don’t change the uniform, Don’t Change History